Tuesday, April 5, 2016

Today we used the Description Cycle to help make our writing more interesting.

2 comments:

  1. I love your writing, especially 'big cartoon eyes like netballs', 'chucked into a pot of paint', 'the birds were so small like pebble sized rocks' and 'the small birds pushed the big bird off the edge'.

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  2. I love the way that you have pot catplliters

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